SEE MY EYES
SEE MY EYES
Gibberish by Zayury
Pictures by Zayury
"I'm leaving for work now sweetheart... your daddy came home tired so don't make to much noise. I love you sweetie be a good girl..."
Mami... see my eyes... see what I'm trying to say...
"We'll be fine, go you're going to be late."
MAMI... SEE MY EYES... see what I'm saying...
DON'T LEAVE ME... DON'T GO!!!!
Mami please... don't leave me with him... can't you see my eyes... as soon as you close the door... it's going to happen again... mami......
NOOOOOO!!!!
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EVE 10/5/08 12:02 AM
..I'm speechless. Zayury, I'm crying as I write this comment. I know that you think I'm the writer of this team and you're the artist, but my friend...you just became a writer. Does anyone else see how talented this girl is? You floor me, every time. I can't even name the emotions this stirred within me.
Orig posted October 18, 2007 5:31 PM
Gayl 10/5/08 12:02 AM
I don't have words for the powerful emotions in this. First of all, the pictures themselves speak volumes. And when accompanied by words, they scream to be heard.
You are both artists. With word and with pictures.
Orig posted October 18, 2007 9:06 PM
lildebbye75 10/5/08 12:03 AM
OMG, you continue to impress and touch me with your creations. Once again I'm at a loss for words to even begin to describe how truely powerful and emotional this is. The pics alone are enough to make your eyes water the caption opens up the flood gates. Amazing! If you never believed me before when I called your work brilliant believe me now my friend. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!!!
Orig posted October 18, 2007 9:28 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:03 AM
Ladies, you humble me with your words... I respect all three of you very much; to receive such compliments from 3 wonderful writers is very flattering, thank-you!
Orig posted October 18, 2007 10:31 PM
beth 10/5/08 12:03 AM
Extraordinary talent. BOTH of you!!!
This was difficult to look at, but exceptionally well paced. The writing and the shots are both beautifully done. The terror comes right out at you.
Orig posted October 19, 2007 4:20 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:04 AM
Beth, thank-you for your kind words. I knew it would be another hard subject to write about, but it was something I felt I had to do... Thank-you for undertanding...
Orig posted October 19, 2007 5:56 PM
drew 10/5/08 12:04 AM
My God, stunning! The emotions are palatable, the shots powerful, wonderfully crafted!
Truly well done! *clap, clap,clap*
Orig posted October 21, 2007 12:19 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:04 AM
Oh, Karen, it means a lot to me that you liked this piece! It was very difficult to write, even harder to take the pictures, but it had to be said! Thank-you dear Karen for your support!
Orig posted October 22, 2007 1:35 AM
Anonymous 10/5/08 12:05 AM
X said....
This story is very touching. When I read it, it brought me down, that is good. This story should touch everyone and make people sad and make people want to cry. The pictures brought the story to life. I love you Zayury!!!!
Orig posted October 27, 2007 1:02 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:05 AM
X, I love you too sweetheart! Now that I made you sad my job is done, lol! ;)
Orig posted October 27, 2007 7:53 PM
Anonymous 10/5/08 12:05 AM
I felt the most unwelcoming chill crawl down my spine reading/seeing this. I hate people who do those things to individuals with no means to defend themselves.
Ophelia.
Orig posted October 30, 2007 12:27 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:06 AM
I agree with you wholeheartedly Ophelia! Thank-you for reading it!
Orig posted October 30, 2007 8:14 PM
sandy 10/5/08 12:06 AM
hi... I found your blog at Tony's, and I came to have a look...
I'm speechless... the writing and pictures are wonderful... :( poor little girl.
Hope you don't mind if I continue to read your poems, and everything you have here! Great job!
Orig posted November 4, 2007 9:04 AM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:06 AM
Sandy, this was a very difficult piece to write, and I am honored that you read it and left such an encouraging comment, thank-you! :)
Orig posted November 6, 2007 11:49 PM
leah 10/5/08 12:07 AM
I'm lost for words here.
The fear, the pain...
very well done!
Orig posted January 4, 2008 4:00 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:07 AM
Leah, you are too kind, thank-you very much for taking the time to read it and for leaving such a wonderful comment! :)
Orig posted January 9, 2008 10:25 AM
SimsBarbie 10/5/08 12:07 AM
Wow..so creepy. And looking at her father....yuck. You did this piece so weel it gave me goosebumps. Excellent.
Orig posted January 17, 2008 12:27 AM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:08 AM
Simsbarbie, thank-you so much for reading my poem, and for your kind comment! It was difficult to put it in writing and in pictures... Thank-you again for your positive feedback! :)
Orig posted January 19, 2008 8:39 PM
nyell 10/5/08 12:08 AM
wow...
You left me completely speechless with this. So many emotions, truly stunning! Excellently done~
Orig posted January 23, 2008 9:51 AM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:08 AM
Thank-you Nyell, your positive feedback and wonderful comment mean a lot to me! :)
Orig posted January 26, 2008 5:03 PM
Astral Faery 10/5/08 12:09 AM
Oh wow! So very sad. I jolted in my seat when I realized what she meant when she said 'See my eyes'. Poor, poor thing - it brings a lot of emotions to the surface. Very powerful.
Orig posted February 8, 2008 11:28 PM
chardonnay 10/5/08 12:09 AM
Wonderfully done!!!
So much I want to say, but I won't. I think you know what I mean. I will say Bravo! to you for touching upon such a delicate subject!!!!
Just know that you did a marvelous job!!!
And just because you don't write long stories, doesn't mean you're not a writer. Being able to describe such powerful emotions, in so little words, that takes talent.
Orig posted February 14, 2008 1:22 PM
ZAYURY 10/5/08 12:10 AM
Astral, thank-you my friend for your sweet comment! I really do appreciate your support! :)
Chardonnay, I do know...THANK-YOU!
THANK-YOU! Your kindness and your support motivates me to keep on 'ticking'! ;)
Orig posted February 14, 2008 2:19 PM
cheripye 10/13/08 1:57 AM
Ok again another home run!
Beautiful screens, intense and heartfelt writing. And yet again another personal relive. 80)
Although these things are easily overcome if you have the right mind set. 80)
ZAYURY 10/16/08 11:16 PM
Thank-you so very much my dear Cherie, for the lovely sentiment! :wub:
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